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"And you call yourself...pt 2"
  by Dimplez


Kyle is your lover,
Jamaal's just a 'friend',
Terrance has a girl,
and Will's someone's husband,
Seth brought you a car,
and Lamar pays your rent,
Rick takes you shopping,
but you're "just fucking" Kent,
you don't have to work,
unless it's done on your back,
if commitment comes into the picture,
you're ready to pack,
they all ask no questions,
but they know they're not the only one,
you use them for what they got,
and disappear when you're done.
You break up happy homes,
and manipulate with your looks,
say you have common sense
so you don't need the books,
independence is what you want
but you're dependent on various men,
have no respect for yourself,
and you call yourself a woman,
well I call you a hoe, and the name does apply,
when you're diagnosed with a disease,
see which of those men will stop by...
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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2009 (01:53 AM)
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  ButterflyDream
11/13/09 (04:59 PM) 
Cant get any more real than this...nicely done

  da black princ...
11/03/09 (12:38 AM) 
Now, i must read part 1 because part 2 was very interesting. I don't call women hoes, but if I did, she would def. be the one.

  Embonpoint
11/02/09 (09:59 AM) 
FIYA Ma! Nicely done! You hit the nail on the head!

  G.A.
10/29/09 (08:41 PM) 
damn part 2 was really somethin... you hit this shit off right, it hits the truth head on and its sad that some women (Hoes) lives like this hoe-ing around like that basically... great drop right here

  HeblessedMe
10/29/09 (11:49 AM) 
love this also i felt a beat in my head going while i was reading this! beautiful scribe

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