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"Angel"
  by Bud Edward


She is still an angel though she fears that she has fell
But she can not see her wings and puts herself through hell

She wants so much to see her halo shining in the mirror
But her eyes see a disguise that blinds her out of fear

Angels look like in the book she has upon her shelf
And so she will not recognize the angel in herself

Angels are so far away in heaven not on earth
But she was made an angel through the miracle of birth

Though her wings can not be lost they never will be found
If she listens to their lies and let's herself be bound

Though her halo can not fade and always will remain
She must come to realize not all halos looks the same
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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2007 (08:09 PM)
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  williesidney
10/07/07 (10:37 AM) 
Man this just was a good write just keep on doign what you are doing because you are good at what you do just keep on writting ten stars.

  foremanlin
10/03/07 (09:19 PM) 
this is truly deep. u are talking about everyone, but noone sees themselves for what and who they are. I get it. this is sooooo good. 10 stars Bud!!!!!!!!!!!!

  Scriptixz
10/01/07 (04:55 AM) 
ahhhhhh...such endearing words of comfort and care! :-) "Angels look like in the book she has upon her shelf/And so she will not recognize the angel in herself" ahhhhhh such marvellous insight and the imagery...goodness

  Stargurl07*
09/29/07 (08:16 PM) 
this is absolutely beautiful. Great write 10 starz

  Bud Edward
09/29/07 (08:11 PM) 
Created 03/31/05 for someone who I hope has finally realized that she is special.

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