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"Angel of Mine..."
A B.R and DOMINICANPOET Collaboration


  B3yond R3d3mption:

(Instrumental) Angel of Mine - Monica


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ppl saying she aint mine..well she still my bella
the only thng that binds the 2 of us together
we been thru the worse..now lets bring in the better
saved by a angel..whom I shall love forever
hair like the sunset..eyes like the ocean
her smile gives me butterflies..wait now im floating
cutest lil voice..when I hear my name spoken
wanna be her daddy 1 day im hoping
she helpd me grow up..now my eyes have been opend
when I lose her I lose u..so my hearts double broken

  DOMINICANPOET:

Double broken i feel that too
Because when i lose you
I have to cry for Bella too
Rather not tell her your gone
So she thinks your here all along...
Daish is all she ask for
So instead of her having a heart torn
I tell her your working...and she goes to her next question
So when you leave i feel double rejection
You left me and lil miss beautiful
The one who made us....who snatched you
I memeber when you said to me
I want to be a part of her life....that beautiful baby....

  B3yond R3d3mption:

wanna be her life...hold her high when she cries
tell her even daddy cries..then wipe the tears from her eyes
I refuse to let my star...cling onto another guy
ima be there by her side..so I don't create a triple suicide
never double rejection..words I said were in vein
can't believe I caused yall pain...im way beyond insane
I love yall both the same...I fuckd up I explained
lost sight of the prize let pride run the game
we started out on the same road..then I changed lanes
but I want to remerge..if that can be arranged
and become a one way street again...
if bella knew we broke up shed say..mommy b with him
mom I needed him...give em 1 more chance he wnt leave again
maybe this fate...or maybe its a sign
two interwined...by the angel of mine

  DOMINICANPOET:

Angel of Mine...Angel of ours....
I wish we could take bout the argumental hours
But we cant so we need to change for the better
Try and make what we have a little stronger
As our road turned into a highway
We both went astray
As our silly words took over us
We lost sight of was important
But now we know what matters
This angel in which Made us who we are..


***Bella by the time you read this
Me and Daddy will be married and have everythin established
But i want you to know real people have problems too
But me and your daddy's strength was You....****
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (01:12 AM)
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  L.edwards
07/23/08 (08:20 PM) 
this is so sweet and im glad ya'll worked things out and she is a very pretty young lady god bless both of yall and stay up

  NICKY BOO
07/22/08 (12:26 PM) 
awwww this wade me tear up sis!! first off this is beautiful...BR i dont really talk to u like that but your pieces were beautiful...much respect for the first stanza..."We been thru worse ...now lets bring in the better...
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