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"Another Again"
  by rhythmicsoul


with the odds all up against you
i continue to persist to...
acknowledge the infatuation
and highten my frustration .
while the greatness of your person
makes the situation worsen
i exacerbate the case
and the attemps all go to waste

the last one didnt work
and all the memories still hurt
see, we were soulmates
destined as partners in our fate
but since you and i are here
the ending of that one is clear.
we didnt end up
and that leads right back to us.

me and my ex were 'posed to spend lives
you and i are cute
but i just refuse to live a lie.
since it didnt work with ex
our future here seems alittle less
than a risk worth taking
for a heart break in the making.
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Date Submitted: Mar 23, 2009 (04:42 AM)
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  Μz Ρ...
07/24/09 (05:34 AM) 
seeing heart break before its broken! yes listen to inner self .. great read xx Thanks for sharing x

  piss a mofo of...
03/23/09 (08:55 AM) 
yes sir that is why i thrown love off the mountain and into the active volcano never to be heard from again...hahahaha...and that last stanza Bro...tied it all up!!

  DOMINICANPOET
03/23/09 (04:48 AM) 
our future here seems alittle less than a risk worth taking for a heart break in the making<<<---Very intense words seep through the screen on this one...I'm loving the word usage...Very nice ten from me...Keep em coming..

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