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"Another"
  by Crazy Baby
  - This Poem is a response to the poem SLOW RELEASE by Tequilla


Another cut
As i hold my head with the fore of my arm
Another regret
As i selfishly turn to self harm

Another tear
Falls down and mixes with the blood
Another liquid
The devils own flood

Another scar
Hidden with the rest
Another problem
Placed up on my chest

Another hater
Spreading there world of lies
Another dream
Forgotten until it dies

Another cut
This deeper than before
Another night
Of sleeping like a whore

Another addiction
To take away my pain
Another scratch
My heart burst into flame

Another razor
Shaper, blunt, dirty
Another man
Telling me i am not worthy

Another side
To my personality
Another hater
Needing to hate on me

Self Harm i ask for you
Till death does us part
Self Harm your the only thing
I'll ever keep in my heart
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Date Submitted: May 28, 2007 (11:09 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  UWanaLickDis
06/27/07 (03:13 PM) 
wow this is real deep i enjoy reading ya poems so keep writing 10 stars

  Tequilla
05/31/07 (01:02 AM) 
wow. thanks for writing back to mine. this is really good. i recon its better than my original lol. and thats gotta suck lol. but no, you did a really good job and deserve to be awarded on it. good job.

  Shaded eyes
05/29/07 (06:51 AM) 
woah.. this is so bloody good lani. im really loving it aye, so much.

  Jez
05/29/07 (01:15 AM) 
This really great. The way that you have given affection to something that is so damaging. Keep up the great stuff

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