hmmmm....im feeling this,such a powerful haiku.nicely done:)

Strong haiku... nothing deeper than the appearance of words.. nice one

powerful message and very true....sometimes people dont look hard enough to understand. excellent piece :)

This is short but says so much...many dont understand about reading between the lines, maybe if we did every now and again, we would understand! Bravo!

wow some bitch done down rating a good poem well inway short but sweet loved it homie