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"APPLE PIE(GUY'S PERSPECTIVE)"
  by JAJA12
  - This Poem is a response to the poem apple pie (girls perspective) by youngsir21


I GOT TO THE BATHROOM TO GET A TOWEL
WIPE MY FACE I'M THINKING WOW
THEN MY GIRL BRIEFLY POPS INTO MY HEAD
BUT QUICKLY DISAPPEARS
CUZ I TURN AROUND ONLY TO SEE THE BROWN BEAUTY
STANDING IN FRONT OF ME
I TAKE HER INTO MY ARMS
AND KISS HER UP AND DOWN
READY TO PLEASURE HER MORE
BUT SHE SAYS WAIT
I SAY WHAT
SHE SAYS I WANA PLEASE YOU
SO SHE KISSES ME DOWN
I'M THINKING YEAH THIS SHIT FINNA
GO DOWN
AND THEN IT HAPPEN SO QUICK THIS GIRL
ENGULF MY DICK IN HER MOUTH
THIS FEELING THAT CAME OVER ME IS LIKE
WOW AND NEVER FELT SUCH PASSION
BUT FOR SOME REASON THE IMAGE OF MY GIRL POPS INTO MY HEAD
BUT ITS FEELING SO GOOD I FORGET ALL ABOUT IT
SHE STOPS AND I'M FEELING SO DRAINED
BUT I STILL DON'T KNOW HER NAME
I YEARNED TO FILL HER UP WITH ME
AND NOWS THE TIME SO
WIT ONE LOOK AT HER COCA COLA
SHAPE
MY DOG WAS READY TO TAKE HER KITTY ON A TRIP
LET HER RIDE THIS DICK
SO FINALLY
I PUT IT IN
HER WALLS ARE FEELING LIKE HEAVEN
FITTIN SO SNUGGLY TO MY DICK
LIKE HER PUSSY WAS MADE FOR IT
I BANGING HER SHIT OUT
PUTTIN MY NAME ON IT
MAKING IT MINE
IN THAT MOMENT
I SWORE I THOUGHT I WAS LOVE
BUT THEN SOMETHING SHARP HIT ME
SHOT PAIN THROUGH MY CHEST
I'M THINKING WHAT IN THE WORLD
TO ONLY TURN AROUND TO SEE THE
BROKEN IMAGE OF MY GIRL..................................................................................
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Date Submitted: Dec 01, 2007 (12:11 AM)
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  Poetry Love
09/25/09 (05:45 PM) 
thats hella deep lady... I am feelin you on that for real... Keep that pen movin

  datboyjada
06/25/09 (06:52 PM) 
damn is all i can say to dis. da ending def got me going. very interesting how u did dis drop.10

  Mr sexual4evas...
06/22/09 (03:31 PM) 
i'm feeling the role change... writing as him and he as her... that's dope!!! love the concept!!!

  cocoadiva
02/17/09 (11:39 AM) 
that was a hot response.... the ending stunned me... i loved it.. 10 starz

  J.Hard
02/17/09 (11:20 AM) 
nice, messed up situation tho...lol

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