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"Appreciated"
  by RoyalMistress


You should never take for granted what one has done for you,
because by the time you have realized and opened your eyes,
it’s already too late. Your thank you’s now mean nothing, all
you hear is your own voice down the hall. It was only a matter
of time before they worked up enough courage to leave, enough
courage to say ‘you don’t deserve me,’ enough courage to speak up
and speak out. All you are left with now are the last words that were
said to you. You are left with the memories of what you once had, but
unfortunately are no more. You’re left feeling sorry for yourself, because
now you’ve come to realize the truth about yourself, and it took the one
you cared about to tell you.
Alone in your room, sitting and thinking to yourself ‘damn I’ve lost a good
thing.’ If only you’ve took the time to tell that person how you really felt,
if only you weren’t so into feeling yourself, when instead you should’ve
been feeling them. What they did, the effort they put in to make you feel
good and great, also wanted and oh so needed. It was never too much for
them to tell you how they felt, so why did you make it seem like a chore?
All they ever wanted was for you to appreciate them, for you to tell them
‘Baby I value your love and I’m grateful for everything you do’. But now…
But now it’s far too late, you’re alone and it’s nobody’s fault but your
own. So see, take this from me. I speak with experience.
If you can not appreciate what you have, then you deserve to have nothing.
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Date Submitted: Feb 05, 2008 (09:09 PM)
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  .Mase Da Rula.
06/19/08 (12:45 PM) 
hmmm....made my wy to ya space... and I see you got a million words but not a firm grasp on poetry structuring.... only aspect I can see that holds you back..cause this was cool the sentiments are there... the passion behind the words is evident but what u need is to work on how its displayed and u do good my lady... take care~1

  Pololeon23
04/05/08 (01:55 AM) 
Nice write.....just put it together so it flows like good love song.....10s

  D.O.X.
02/06/08 (02:14 AM) 
i see that relationships are a focal point in your poems...maybe you try & come out of your comfort zone.....step outside of yourself alittle bit & expand.....you dont want to be one dimensional...feel me?

  .Archaic.Bliss...
02/05/08 (10:37 PM) 
well um welcomes to the site and as far as the write I get the general feel that y ou are trying to convey... aye structure is where its at though... place the words the way you want it to be read and that will make this that much more sweeter. other than that you good money homie :)

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