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"Artist Unknown..SC One Liner Challenge"
  by Jjonzzie


If you knew my fear, you would understand my pain.
The fear of me giving you my all
Only to have you walk away
with thoughts of never seeing me again.
The sole purpose of me being, so cautious
with my feelings, is because,
I'm fragile, and afraid, so afraid
you'll find me suddenly, unappealling
I'm afraid I'll regress, into my private fortress,
An unfinished masterpiece, unmasked.
like a pen reversing it's ink,
Artist...marked as unknown
like a writer reverbing the script,
Answers to questions, forever; to reamain unasked.
An animal acting out of pure instinct.
An uncopyrited playrite, stolen.
My love used as a token.
Muted sound that never finishes it's path
just unheard sound waves, gasping for breath.
intending on pounding it's unanswered wrath
on the soul of an artist, whose kept
a little piece of a place that theyve never shown.
A place where the artist can be at peace,
X marks the spot....Artist unknown.......
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Date Submitted: Jul 14, 2009 (01:27 AM)
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  stranger
07/19/09 (09:50 AM) 
Beautiful feeling to this peaceful piece underlines the humility in the words... love is the masterpiece unfinished by most in this word, yet the longing for it remains , few resist the corruption of it through misunderstanding its deep significance, the very source of life... I love this piece the searching, the yearning , the unknowing captured in a soft flow that entrances the reader ... :)

  Kunspikuous
07/18/09 (02:59 AM) 
i really like this one here. ima add it to muh favz. u used such depth and imaging. 10 boo.

  krazy
07/18/09 (12:33 AM) 
THERE R NO WORDS TO EXPRESS THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT THIS POEM! BIG UPs TO YOU LIL MAMA FOR REAL IT WAS HOT! I LOVED YOUR WORD PLAY! 10*S FROM A POET CALLED KRAZY AND IT'S A FAV!

  B. Rose
07/14/09 (01:48 AM) 
That was an ill concept lady im feeling it... nicely done..

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