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"Asshole creeping"
  by Dee239


Asshole Creeping:
Let me set the scene:
I’m in prison:
and I’m asshole creeping:
looking for the plumpest:
Booty:
Truly:
I’ve been blessed:
I’m a Man of many words:
In this poem:
so check em if you know em:
I’ve been to prison three times:
this time their keeping me in:
In my formal life:
I fucked children:
I was a confirmed child molester:
I did it daily without thinking:
Daily without it sinking:

Asshole creeping:
Voice change:
My baby lost her innocents:
I picked her up afterwards:
not knowing what exactly to do:
I wiped her off promising to avenge her:
this is a cycle:
of little girls being raped by their fathers

My mommy told: me:
that we all have our crosses to bare
and our dresses to wear:
whatever that means:
My father:
HE:
HE:
I won’t shed tears any more:
I can’t speak anymore:
the only word that comes to mind is
HE: Nothing more:

Voice change:


Prisons easy:
My little girls pregnant:
and it’s my baby::
I guess thats why i pray to god:
cause my father raped me:
The more i pray and don’t get the answers:
the more i self-destruct:
That’s how i find myself here:
I lost it all at eight:
And now I took it from my little girl:
to see how it feels to be the one in control
for once:
Now I see her in my sleep:
this brown skinned angel:
I need help:
every time I masturbate:
She's the face i see:
and when i can't get pleasure from that:
the brown skinned angel crying will do it for me:
So i am asshole creeping:
Searching for my next: Sex victim:
I find her:
She's 5 at the time:
and My own child:
My daughters child:
this time: she was waiting for me:
She cut me and I killed her:
I find myself here Still:
asshole creeping:
Forgive me:
Name: Remy: Inmate 666
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Date Submitted: Sep 14, 2009 (05:58 PM)
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  Brokenvegtable
09/16/09 (09:06 PM) 
your pushing limits with your work ill give you that .... i think youll have an easier time with it cause your a girl and i guess its more of a sympathetic things i guess ... at times its a bit hard to see the changes in people because of the way you use the : alot ... but i can understand it ... jsut to some that are unwilling to sit and distingush your gona lose them .... i am gona enjoy reading more of you ... i see so much potential in you ... your style is different in alot of ways and im v...
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  Poetry Love
09/14/09 (09:28 PM) 
whoa... I was not quite expecting that. I don't really know what to say because you don't come across poetry such as this very often. So I will not demean your piece by saying good job. But I will say that I felt the sickness of reality here and that is to be rivaled and revered. My hat is off and I commend you for the expression.

  Mr. DID
09/14/09 (06:16 PM) 
THIS WAS HELLA DEEP. REALLY MADE ME SHED A TEAR ON THIS HERE. SO SPEECHLESS RITE NOW IREALLY DNT NO WAT TO PUT BUT BUT KEEP YEA HEAD UP AND LIVE THE FULLEST OF LIFE. 10*s AND A FAV. LOVE * LIFE * pOETRY* 4EVA

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