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"Asympl3 Diss"
  by B.R
  - This Poem is a response to the poem HAIKU ARTIST...DOMINICANPOET BITCH PLEASE!!! by ASympl3Diamond




shawti u gone come at dp aha...what's a goon to a dragonking nigga...so
dnt b on it like oh u hada com back for her..nigga u came at dp for goob
so chill on it plus dp dnt kno bout dis....I dare u to strike back

asympl3diamond or cubic zirconium
lemme get a mic check...spittn flames from the potium
fuck ya with ya words...use some goob..for petroleum
dp might be husling points..but u dick riding ho-ing them
ya got more salt n ya game..then soduim
I tie em up..while u rodeo rode...em

u just a fat bitch's groupie
I seen ya flow..look like the decapition from a horror movie
u came at my fam...damn u must be looney
don't dis back..u cud neva out do me

dissing n paragraphs..talking big shyt
said her flow weak but u aint rhyme once u simple bitch
u garbage..words suck like a baby to a tit
u a dumb chic..u dnt give brain..u give stupid..on a dick
dnt rap..u look stupid when ya spit
ya can't spit...unless you got a lisp...aha
dragonbreath..this..burn a
ya not riding goobs dick he got boobs..u on his clit
ya look so ill..but ya flow not sick
I see u posting poems...but ur not writing shyt

she writes haikus..a bit..I admit
but ur flow flavorless.like a lolipop stick
he's thinks he lil wayne..so u his lollipop bitch
u take it daily..like a vitamin supplement
dicking riding champ...no reason just for the love of it
ill wrap ya flow n bubble it
label..worse flow..then show ya to the public
I know I got ya..cuz dis was hard for me to stomach

now goob hope u like ur goons now..seems nun them close to a niggaz
level aha.....u fuckd up now bruh

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Date Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 (01:39 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/24/08 (12:36 AM)
Author: tha truth
Poem Title: LMFAO DIS SILLY ASS ...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (29)
  MzSpoon aka "T...
09/20/08 (11:19 AM) 
Wow...B.R. I didn't know you had this in you.

  NINO-G
07/24/08 (02:30 PM) 
SMH...WTF...

  Skittlezz
07/24/08 (10:41 AM) 
=(

  fr3$h P
07/24/08 (03:41 AM) 
hahaha i read her part...i had to read ur shit too to see who took it. lol y'allz kill me wit all dis G.S beefin n shit.

  AR-15
07/23/08 (10:27 PM) 
LMAO.... I can't even comment, shit's hilarious

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