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"Awaken Eyes"
  by Truessence4u


My heart skipped two beats cause I recognized your
voice right away.........
The past you brought back in your gaze-yesterday
enchanted my heart to a sinful dance that dark
pool of trembling silence came out to awaken my
dark side of (you) (me) and (we).............

'It was definitely like our love at first sight
(awaken eyes)
(awaken eyes)
(awaken eyes)
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Date Submitted: Apr 30, 2009 (01:32 PM)
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  Magic✯
07/30/09 (09:59 PM) 
beautifully expressed... loved the flow in this piece... very well executed. 10 starz

  theycallmelife
07/26/09 (12:56 AM) 
There was a fregrance i remembered in the same way...not as strong but relates the feeling well

  MzSpoon aka "T...
07/25/09 (02:37 PM) 
Being awaken by an insurmountable love is truly beautiful. I really liked the repetition in this piece too.

  deandrea
06/05/09 (02:43 AM) 
You know that you've always been able to say so much with so few words lol! I'm feelin this write ma'ma...

  Lone SoulJah
05/27/09 (05:31 PM) 
nice bought i know u could do better.... :)

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