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"B3yond B3ing a Bitch (Republished)"
  by g00n


(Added note: I deleted this so i could stay part of a group.. but that group disbanded so this piece is going back up.. Now.. i dont really have a problem with homeboy anymore.. hes already seen this piece.. but im not deleting my forms of expression anymore because someone asks me to.. )



(Before I get into this. know that I aint taking no sides.. Im only doing this cause dude wanted to get loud in my inbox. I'm my own side.. If you mad at that.. so be it.. cause i dont give a fuck..)

Ok you whiney little fuck

I didnt wanna have to do this to you

but fuck it

I seen you in that pic.. guess you deleted it

You got your seat belt on..

Good you might need it...



*Rubs eyes* Awww poor baby getting all worked up.. HIKE YA SKIRT UP
crying over the same shit for days... your new name is "Sister Mary May"
Stop acting like you run blocks.. You are only hard when it comes to my inbox
You said some shit like "Do Sum".. I ain't chinese faggot.. brush ya gums...
You never cocked a hammer, or been in the slammer... so fix your grammar, Hannah Montana.
Stop pretending you can rhyme.... we all know you google your punch lines..
Putting out some shit like "BR's side of story".. Nobody gives a fuck.. you're still corny...
On GS making peace treaties [WTF].. Ok little boy, make sure you eat your wheaties
Wouldn't want you to get sleepy.. in case you gotta be a G, and Beef, B...
You don't have skills.. .. the only time you kill a write.. Is when your inkwell spills
Oh and i know you don't push drugs.. the only white residue you got.. is hanging from ya gums
Salesman? you're a bum!.. You only sell crack.. By bending over when ya clients come
When you drop some shit, i admire your dedication.... Cant be easy dealing with constipation..
No one wants to hear an explanation.. You got no values like the baby boom generation..
How you gonna stir alphabet soup.. when you still writing a book report on "Chicken Soup"?
No one wants to read the raps you forge... We too old to read Curious George (You look like him)..
AND THIS IS NOT YOUR SITE... You only shine when your forehead hits the right light
You say "Im long lasting when it comes to beef".. You only last long when you're taking beef
It's suicide to step to you and battle?... Must be all that practice, rapping into your baby rattle..
Perhaps you need a tissue for your issue... crying because someone on the net dissed you...
You only have one raggedy ass hoodie?... I sent your moms the support check.. What's goodie?
Fucking a girl with a "pen" is not compensation... You only please bitches on yahoo conversations.
You only mentioned the movie "waist deep".. because you beat your meat to posters of Ty-rese
Yeah, I know you push wigs back... every time you take off your girlfriend's fitted hat..
So you pack steel, and got weapons concealed?.. I don't want to be the one and reveal...
That your idea of an arms deal... Is a dutch rudder with your boy in an automobile...
I know you are thinking "My rhymes are hot.."... so you showcase them in the top spots
Then you wondering "Why did they flop?"... because they got exed out faster then pop up block..
You wanna kill someone over poetry... LMAO.. You about as hardcore as that group Floetry...
B3yond r3d3mption b3 fond of fals3 hood r3pping.. Hey Tina Turn3r, you "Better Get To Stepping"..
Stop trying to battle everyone like this is 8 Mile.. GET THE FUCK OVER IT, Gomer Pile.. haha
When it comes to this site, you are a disgrace.. how come your eyes so far apart on your face?
No wonder why your so fond of someone named Avon.. You just want some cream for your face...
You mad hard so you diss with spit... then feel bad so write goth-ic.. cmon dude wheres your log-ic?
Like i said stop trying to explain... That shit falls on deaf ears when your fucking lame..
You wonder why your getting left alone?... You think its cool to pop shit on telephones..
391 poems submitted, guess your committed.. To bad no one gave a fuck what was written
How does your fucking profile even exist... It only consists of shit i insist to dismiss
You know what i won't diss your poem list.. But ya raps?.. shit is old like floppy disks...
And trust, you aint surrounded by chicks.. They like you as much as ovarian cysts..
In fact, the only thing you are ever in the midst of... Is dicks... LMAO
Im sick of your disgusting shit all over the site, slob.. this ain't www.2girls1cup.com
You gonna diss people's children?.. "You should be seen and not heard".. Who you kiddin?
You mad ya girlfriend bounced? Try fixin it... You're lucky there is pills now for impotence
Who you think you are talking to?.. everyone is sick of hearing from you, stop stalking dude.
You get heated and rate poems 1 star... Ice Cube, take your anger somewhere else.. gym aint far..
I sent you comments before i was trying to be nice.. I didnt actually read what you said, aiight?
Its funny that you mentioned "pikachu"... Let us all know you still a child fool..
Don't kid yourself you aint taking no ones pride.. Most peoples raps wash you away like tide..
Your words are already being forgotten dope.. and you soft as hell "cotton eye joe"..
I could go all damn day with this flow.. but what havent i said that isnt already known..
You can write a million disses to me.. It dont make you a G.. I did this shit so you would see.
That you aint the only one who can crack jokes.. now go to ya room 'for i tell ya folks.. faggot..

(This is the first and last thing i will ever write to you kid.. dont try and get my attention, dont send me messages, they fall on deaf ears.. basically its go fuck yourself.. i aint gonna lie this was fun to write but i aint makin a habbit of it..)

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Date Submitted: Apr 04, 2009 (02:06 PM)
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  Juicy1on1
04/10/09 (03:38 AM) 
straight fire.

  Dimplez
04/10/09 (02:12 AM) 
DAYUM!!!! i'm not one 4 disses but i must admit this is kinda hot...keep doin you

  YuNeek
04/06/09 (09:11 PM) 
Yessum, pretty long for me. hehe But I liked it. I found some parts funny. Ugh, but drama! Especially over the net. I just think its childish but you let it be known that it is and he need to back off ya know. Great write. And by the way: You got my favorite monkey up. haha :) 10

  JokerJay
04/06/09 (07:25 PM) 
You really put it to this dude. The flow is crazy. This is a fav for me.

  skies
04/05/09 (04:05 PM) 
i am lovin this write its funny how you diss that guy whoever he is

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