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"Baby Bare With Me>..."
  by InFamouZ1


My dream is no fantasy
So baby bare with me
Baby i understand that we
Dont see eachother on the reguarly
Once or twice if lucky
Every other week (Yeha! thats crazy)
With you working and me too
School starting back soon
Man thats going to be a crusie
Im posting my apps and resumes
Everywhere constantly on the daily
Not sure if they are even looking at me
But consistantly i keep, presistantly
going and going
Franticly continusly getting tired and lazy
Askng for more money
Better hours, off on weekends perfferrably
Jan 14, damn the thought of that date
It makes my skin crawl im off the wall
But i gotta do what it do
To get where I want and do what it do
Get off in my feild making my money
Keeping a few hundred in the pocket
A few grands stashed on the plastic no credit
Bills payed
And with the extra cash
Put it into the unfound safe
So bare with me
I promise more you'll see of me
Just let me work out the kinks
While your on the rightside of me
In do time you'll see that gold band
followed by the roc as big as my hand
Bare with me
Through my dreams cause they are not fantasies

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Date Submitted: Dec 22, 2007 (10:34 PM)
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  El Diablo
04/12/08 (12:09 PM) 
I agree with many of ya comments. This coulda went well with a particular someone...not saying any names, but to have somebody wait, man or woman, and to have somebody work like that, man or woman, is someone to keep close...too bad impatience gets the best of us.

  .Mase Da Rula.
12/29/07 (01:16 AM) 
man a women waiting for a dude is hard to come by.. but if she a good one.. she will.... so I hope ur wait bruh..... I know when mines comes along I would want her to do the same/// well written... a few spelling errors but that was minor.. well done

  S3XII R3D B0N3...
12/29/07 (12:46 AM) 
wow baby boy that was so good ... ihad to give you ten stars

  heaviness
12/29/07 (12:26 AM) 
time is of the essence - and father time will always reveal the truth in the end --- let the reward wait for the prize and we will all win out

  Shadow
12/28/07 (10:10 PM) 
i feel ya. any real woman who loves you will feel you to and have no problem waiting fo you to accomplish what you need to. good write.

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