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"Back To Reality"
  by baby wiggles


This is the best day ever.
No problems.
No fights.
No crying and no death.
There wasent any gun shots today
No one getting hurt.
NOTHING.
All the family was getting along.
Nobody was behind with the rent.
Nobody was looking for the sticky stuff.
If you know what i mean.
Everybody was smiling.
Everybody was happy.
Everybody was laughing.
Even the babies werent crying.
Everything was all good.
This day i never wanted to end.
Then i woke up.
And its back to reality
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Date Submitted: Jun 20, 2009 (10:34 PM)
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  Chl03
06/23/09 (03:54 PM) 
Wow this poem is an eye opener and makes me think about how a good day is hard to come by sometimes! great write.

  T T
06/23/09 (03:28 PM) 
reality is a motha fucka

  Poetry Love
06/23/09 (02:50 PM) 
yeah... i often feel this way about about life in general... very nicely put lady.

  untitled
06/20/09 (11:23 PM) 
this is some really shit it makes wish the world was like that man even the true north has the pretty bad shit to man

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