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"BATTLE BEGIN"
  by AmateurNoMore


Focus
on the within
and unleash the master of destruction
and will the competition away
or immerse into the depths of the seas of the complacent!
Focus
on the evident,
you're in control
of destiny; do you choose to prevail
or dwell with the weakest in the under bowels of the mediocre?
Focus
on the practical
and the obvious will exude
itself so it to seep into your mind and leave you no choice!
Focus
on the outcome
but only to return to the source
of the beast within and to maintain control of precious self.
Focus
on the attainable
and you can't go astray
Don't step off the written path and
lose the drive, the desire to reach the mark of excellence!
Accomplish
what lies before you,
don't lose focus and know that
He is there to hold you, so choose to perform, excel, and conquer!
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2009 (11:09 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  bigmo
08/13/09 (05:43 PM) 
very fine write. i like the ephasis of 'focus'. very clever. keep up the good work.

  Cornfed
08/01/09 (11:24 PM) 
Balance and flow is so sharp! Your pen is full of talent!

  Young Street P...
07/30/09 (11:07 PM) 
real deep ma keep doin you.....real shit right here and nicely put...well written..i loved it from beginning to da end...gotta giv dis a 10 keep doin your thing sweetie

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