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"Be Careful"
  by *shell bear*


"Words of encouragement before you ghet mad and let things bother you"

Be careful don't speak
for some are strong
and some are weak.

Be careful choose wise
for soome are true
while others tell lies.

Be careful of who you love
for some take for granted of
what we were sent from above.

Be careful, be very aware
for some take our love and
some don't really care

Be careful of what you thought
you have to gain
for some will say i love you
and turn around and leave you in pain

Be careful, don't turn and run
for some will love you and
some will say it was only fun!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date Submitted: May 20, 2009 (09:48 AM)
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  Trill
09/09/09 (09:56 AM) 
Yeah thanks for the advice ill put this one in my fav`s for sure.I love this one tho.

  shy252
09/01/09 (09:16 AM) 
i like this its good advice shows ur a caring person

  Lil rican sold...
06/21/09 (03:00 AM) 
This is a great write especially the last parts where you stated that "Some will say it was only fun." Good job though and you are talented.

  Traxler
06/21/09 (02:00 AM) 
I can feel that you put a lot of emotion and personal feeling behind this. Your rhyming is great as well. 10/10

  Antman436
06/19/09 (08:03 PM) 
I really love this one!

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