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"Beach chair ( my version)"
  by poundcake


This is my version of the first verse on Jay-Z's prophetic song Beach chair





Life is but a dream to me
Constanly tryin to wake up
18 years dealing with
bitches that are faker
so i'm bout that real shit
24/7 365, 366 in a leap year
finding out why we here
journey's lead us everywhere
wishing life was just a
Beach chair
went from havin heavy loads
crossin over dirty roads
Hear the devil whisper to me
"you aint ready for it"
I just hope my hearing wrong
struggle make life seem long
Mommy hope you prayin for me
See i got angels on my path
so i'll never go astray
and if the prophecies correct
then there will be a brighter day
and the sins of all others
will be forgotten by tommorow
and all the yesterdays
are forever washed away
and when i'm no longer here
to guide you to there
i'll give up my share
of his forgiveness
and a new beach chair

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Date Submitted: Oct 31, 2007 (08:30 PM)
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  SlimCutta
10/31/07 (08:56 PM) 
Wonderful writing to this song...i like this..great write. I loved how you put in prophecies and forgiveness into this. This is great...a favorite for me..thank you.

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