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"BEAUTY I SEE…"
  by MR.INTUITIVE


BEAUTY I SEE…

I estimate that there are will be happy days
hope ripened with vivacity and, mind clear
anticipate with prosperous with appreciation and praise
so hypnotic they mesmerize all the year.
so I pray to god above,
if I can visualize him, being emerge with superiority and love
leading his ideal deed!
so in my day this love has been a spiritual day
with faith I shall commit to memory long,
so I dance with a pasture boogie to the sound of jazz today
of quiet streets where kids can play with radiance singing songs.
like ecstasy I witness in shorty’s eyes,
with care for gaze such tender bliss . . .
Whos not with me be but I tenderly miss
she was gentle,kind and wise
i would write this poem in blue if you can see her eyes
Holy grounds would challenge paradise
all my daylight hours all my life may well be like this!
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Date Submitted: May 27, 2009 (06:51 PM)
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  Babiigirl2245
11/21/09 (09:54 PM) 
this is written very well the emotions are strongly felt good write

  juicylips
10/07/09 (10:35 PM) 
i love it....beutiful write

  liftingluna
07/31/09 (09:11 PM) 
i love those last three lines the best the the visualizations... nice piece

  SassiiSexii
07/31/09 (06:49 PM) 
U have strong words in this poem. Love it.Keep doin what u doin...... This is Beautifull also but 10 starz

  Tran'Quility
07/30/09 (08:55 PM) 
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN, STRONG SHOW OF EMOTIOINS IN THIS.

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