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"best 48 minutes of my life"
  by dezzfest


[not really erotic but it is kinda. just wanted to capture your attention]

i loved every bit of the passion.
my sexual frustration now filled with satisfaction.
moving fast not a thing that i do.
and i know that i just met you,
but the things we just did and said
makes me not give a damn you were in my bed.
the desire in your speech and touch
lets me know there no such thing as too much.
i carressed your body and you carressed mine.
our hearts souls and bodies were intertwined.
i never knew, i was quite suprised,
it would be so good my very first time.
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Date Submitted: Jun 07, 2007 (07:22 PM)
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  shookie
06/07/07 (09:04 PM) 
nice one>>>>>>>>>damn i wish my first time waz witchu cause it seemz like u know how to treat a gurl.....but we cant alwayz get what we want rite?

  JRain
06/07/07 (07:58 PM) 
lol i hoped my first be like that..lol but you dont have to capture me with "erotic" im not much erotic poems..cuz i cant really relate..but this was very good..and im glad to be the first to witness this masterpiece

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