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"best friend"
  by Atl_Breezy18
  - This Poem is a response to the poem B.U.D.D.Y by El Diablo


YOU'RE the one that awakens me from sleep
and surely the friend I'm going to keep.
You resurrect the emotions within my heart
and now that we're so close, you've become a part.

MY feeling's for you I refuse to deny.
There is something special there, I will not lie.
Our little fantasies may be child's play,
but I could share those times with you each day.

BEST doesn't begin to describe the friendship we posses,
but nothing seems to fit, it is just so hard to express.
You sooth my spirit and refurbish my mind.
Ever since we first met, you have been so kind.

FRIEND, therapist, support system, you could accomplish so much.
I know you will fill me up inside when we first touch.
In my thoughts you are lingering always,
throughout all my nights along with my days.

COOKIE, we will always be there for one another. You're more than a friend,
you are someone I can count on each time when I need help, no end.
Our love goes on forever, past time and when we die.
If I ever randomly smile, you're the reason why.
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Date Submitted: Jul 12, 2008 (11:12 AM)
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  Skittlezz
07/28/08 (03:23 PM) 
i'm really liking that piece... and i'm feelin your flow. And I agree wit El Diablo, It's kool how you did the acrostic thing with words... that was very original. My fav lines were that last two... great job, hon... 10 *s, keep it up! **SKITTLEZZ**

  El Diablo
07/12/08 (11:26 AM) 
What u tryin' to do? Make a nigga cry or somethin? u kno El D don't cry, come on now, got me chokin up and stuff... Ok now time for the actual criticism lol. I digg how its kinda acrostic, but with words, not letters, n i like that concept, and u gotta call me out by the cookie tho!?!? lol. I love it buddy, I love you buddy :) Madd Props

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