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"Birdz' Envy"
  by DeeDee8908


Soaring up so high
Spreading wingz so freely
2 eyes peering from a windowz’ distance
Admirably
Accompaniez the clear, beautiful blue sky
Ignorant of humanity
2 eyes peering from a windowz’ distance
Rainfall overflowz, close to insanity
Soft winds blow, breezy
Devoid of knocking the creature off track
2 eyes painfully roll away from negative nothingz
That spit from own
Feeling like a stab in the back
Chopz squawk liberally in choir
Louder and louder
2 eyes
Emphasize
The truth one speaks
But is objected by a redundant doubter
Leading an eager, obedient, cluster of
Clouds Company
South for the chill
Which is right
Kept up by
Arrogance of others
Regarding onez’ considerate, indulgent fight
Were 2 eyes all night
Forever is the sky
Skinning the Earth
For miles and miles,
I watch go by
What seems so free
2 eyes landing down to reality
Wishing they could be
Four walls trap in
So much to say
Wouldn’t know where to begin
How to convey
Distracted by the sounds of freedom
2 eyes growing jealous to be them
No need for more wander
“What could possibly be a birdz’ envy”?
I’ll proudly answer you
Not possibly
Definitely
“A birdz’ envy, iz
Me”
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Date Submitted: Dec 02, 2008 (01:36 AM)
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  Sie7e
12/06/08 (11:29 PM) 
Very interesting concept. Love how you draw in the readers with not solely the details of flying but rather those who dont take flight. If i am correct thats the overall idea right. nonetheless this was a very inspiring piece. and of course no bird will ever soar higher then where you are.

  Quite
12/06/08 (11:03 PM) 
this was an interesting piece lil sis

  koolaid
12/06/08 (12:10 PM) 
wow this was fire your word play ridicolus you had me in a zone i was like so into this that that i forgot ai had a l burning lol straight fiyah 10 starz ma you put in work

  mikeb30
12/05/08 (01:57 AM) 
impressed w/imagery and concept used in this write...def put ur reader in the moment w/u...

  Docc
12/03/08 (02:03 AM) 
wow ma u killed dis u did ya damn thang na mean keep up da good work yo on da real

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