His cerebellum is his only enemy,
the inseams of his Timbos entrap pearls of
Bitter attainment,
Though he views these pearls indifferently,
Trying to ignore their glimmer in pursuit of ignorant simplicity
he cant help but have his stride impeded immediately,
when he falls he sees the visage of who he needed to be
reflected off the surface that gives breath to his entity,
As he's progressed no longer can words pick up his heaviness,
nor can they spark his readiness,
No he is beyond respirations shaped form
He loves his hate for its false depth and visible shallowness,
This in turn fuels inside his heart confusions invisible storm,
The olny time he feels the abscence of hostility ,
is when veiwed by the innocent
Those who see him for who he aspires to be,
Not what is manifest when he underachives tiredly,
Thinking thats all i need for someone to truly inspire me
This is truelly a wonderful poem i enjoyed every word of it and i can read this poem a dozen times and get a new concept out of it i am going to have to favorite this poem keep writing please i love reading poetry from great poets like you
this poem took me in...completely encompassed me in the spaces that fell between your words...awaiting the next...brilliance...that's what this was...and i have a feeling that it didnt take too much thought...something about it seemed natural...but that was just the flow of it - the content was crazy...i had to read it twice...very thought-provoking and true for many young men...i'm sure of it..."trying to ignore their glimmer in pursuit of ignorant simplicity" - but it wasn't bliss i see...awes... [+]more
this poem took me in...completely encompassed me in the spaces that fell between your words...awaiting the next...brilliance...that's what this was...and i have a feeling that it didnt take too much thought...something about it seemed natural...but that was just the flow of it - the content was crazy...i had to read it twice...very thought-provoking and true for many young men...i'm sure of it..."trying to ignore their glimmer in pursuit of ignorant simplicity" - but it wasn't bliss i see...awesome piece [-]collapse
I'm tellin you, again, you have an awesome way with words. I agree, you really did do your thing with this one. You've got that gift, continue to bless us with it and show the rest of these pencil happy brothers, what realness is about.