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"Black Cross"
  by Laydii Lyric


deadly poetics
blacken ink written in blood
in composition

constantly wishing
that life was equal to death
in less than my last

b r e a t h

gasping in silence in the darkness of brutal hues
bruised in confusion

and in the minute
I wish to die completely
needing nothing but

h u s h e d l o n l i n e s s

in this mess
like life in the middle of death
under Satins crown
so here I lay
in my own violent blood
in this crafted cross

d
o
w
n

s
i
d
e

u
p
.
up side down

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Date Submitted: Oct 19, 2009 (02:35 PM)
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  B. Rose
10/28/09 (12:53 AM) 
Wow... this was deep.... crazy ish Keish but I love it...

  Shye201
10/19/09 (03:47 PM) 
this was a nice write and the pic just set it off....

  Showcase
10/19/09 (03:11 PM) 
firdst off the picture in the background is amazing I want to draw that, but just like Gina said you needed no picture the poem speaks volumes and I felt the chill, made me really realize the reason I love poetry so much. With pieces like this wow so vivid yet so strong an appealing I love it hun pEACE.elevate

  คว...
10/19/09 (03:09 PM) 
had to come back to check visual..u know im so artsy...loved it...its dark and beautiful....

  คว...
10/19/09 (02:43 PM) 
girl this dont even need a picture...this was an excellent piece...i love the dark scribes....im snaggin this one...

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