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"Black"
  by Afroditee
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Red by ...Da Fort...



black, he was potent.
skin brushed errantly by night’s
artful star power,

nuclear surges
of electrical currents
through his pliant skin;

as sweat scampered down
melanin ridden casement -
porous, fertile ground.

eyes stalking naughty
streams leaving saline remnants
on his potent core;

(me, wanting to bathe
him authoritatively
with my tongue’s rhythm;

up, down, and around
licking intricate patterns
scintillatingly),

over imbibing
mentally on his discharge,
when, subsequently,

pulled defiantly
from passion’s daze, wondering:
was heart black within?

****
'Fro

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Date Submitted: Mar 05, 2008 (07:07 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 03/06/08 (02:11 AM)
Author: Mz Sick Prose
Poem Title: :::WHITE:::

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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  9HANTOM
06/30/08 (09:35 AM) 
1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,00,000,000,000,00,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,00,000,000,000,000 STARZ

  mindigoblue
04/15/08 (10:29 PM) 
This is truly a great work. You wrapped both beginning and ending wonderfully in your title. I love the way you summed this with a question of the heart despite initiating it with a statement of desire. Wonderfully written.

  Jody
04/15/08 (02:27 PM) 
lol, this is brilliant! I love your words. The use of "black" to see beauty and then question heart, very nice! I guess this would be love/lust at first sight then brought back to reality, knowing it's truly/really about the inner... very nice piece, enjoyed it!

  sabretooth
04/15/08 (04:54 AM) 
this was exceptional! on a whole other level...great prose...great write...great talent. u really got me thinking here

  11th Wonduh
04/12/08 (05:29 PM) 
now i gotta deprogram and what happens, another absolute smash. i love the creativity and the tone of this piece, as always, you put your poetical foot in these joints.

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