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".Black .Hole. Sun."
  by ...Da Fort...


*Greetings Earthings to a metaphorical acid trip on reality*


….illustrating….
solar rocks
…illuminating….
cargo pockets

…galaxies…
….tattooed….
on the back of my shoes
boaster rockets

to boldly go

…levitation…

…acceleration…

toggling gears

Black hole sun
won’t you come
& wash away my fears

extinction level event
read the world is perishing
what news is new

…broadcasting…
insipid smiles
my gas mask
tightly worn
while I cruise

…devils…
rocking shades
a tuxedo
.…waiting….
for our bodies
in graves

Black hole sun
won’t you come
save us
from our darkest days

forest trees

…redwoods…

wrapped around
my fingers
meshed lead

soldiers guinea pigs

…dirty bombs…

def con color …red…

while children
blast mp3s

…reading…

boob filled magazines

Black hole sun
won’t you come
say this is all a dream

…diamonds…
…jeans…
brand names
on seams

…hypnotized…

…fooled…

guns teaching

…death….

in local schools
bullets misused tools

…politics…

twisted sickness
Obama makes history
Clinton makes news

Black hole sun
won’t you come
give us clearer views

--COME---Wash away history--

--COME---Wash away misery--

--COME---Wash away agony--

--COME---Wash away tragedy--

--COME---Wash away reality—

..Black Hole Sun free me… from… this Gravity…

....this song is so depressingly liberating.....

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Date Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 (12:42 AM)
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  .Archaic.Bliss...
08/03/08 (02:26 PM) 
the poetry... man. you were on another level with this one sir.. but i took so long to come back to this write due to the song... its a childhood thing.. taht song.. and the vid.. I've been shaky about it FOR LIFE lol. loved this though.. now.. im off to run under the covers or something...

  mariposa
07/31/08 (04:52 AM) 
the visuals of a flight in the beginning didnt prepare me for the social tone that this write takes on after a few lines... the part that moved me were the sections that became almost a prayer... and by the ending you left us with knowledge that this is a song... but, in the form it was written (personally, with social injections, and pleading prayer) it reminds me of a modern day pslam... awesome.

  --->QUEENPIN O...
07/05/08 (04:14 PM) 
guns teaching …death…. in local schools bullets misused tools …politics… twisted sickness Obama makes history Clinton makes news <----A DAMN SHAME AINT IT??? AND ITS APPARENT THAT I AM NOT INTO THIS MUSIC GENRE...BUT I KNEW U WERE GOING TO USE THIS SONG BY THE TITLE...MY DAD LIKES THIS SONG SO ITS KINDA STUCK WITH ME...LOL...DOPE ASS, INFORMATIVE WRITE

  Isis sun
06/24/08 (05:26 AM) 
Wow..whoa..where have I been? What a way to illustrate this stagnant maze we live in..I'm with One..I had to reread three times to ingest all the abstract info collected in this piece..amazingly written - much respect..em hotep

  Neurotically I...
06/24/08 (01:37 AM) 
This was Powerful Fort...Every Line has some truth to it and was givin knowledge showin reality.

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