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"blame me"
  by ciana8stock


see
my intentions were not purposely done
in fact, all i wanted to do was hide and run
into a pit for my actions
being with a man who
of course was not my man
but instead belonged to a faithful woman
i would rather be ridiculed
instead of feeling the way i do
miserable emotional pain
but neither him or I could sustain
our fascination
with each other..

putting this faithful woman through hell and back
it was as if you were on the prowl and ready to attack
she didn't deserve your late nights
your on going fights
the way you left her
in a hurry
to come to me..

but now all i can do is tell you to blame me
BLAME ME!
for making this woman

this faithful woman
turn into a statistic
shutting every man down
who comes her way
due to the fact that the very first man she loved
turned her away


BLAME ME!
for every woman she sees
she has reason to believe
that one day their man will be doing
the cheat-ing

BLAME ME!
because now she sits
in the dark
smokin a cigarette
wondering
why and how she had so much resent
in her heart

BLAME ME!
because in the end of it all
i took part in your dishonesty
towards a woman
who was just trying to love another human being
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2009 (07:47 PM)
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  MAVRICK
10/05/09 (08:11 PM) 
Hard hitting emotions distributed all through this write...but you can't take the trials that everyone must go through on your own...everyone has their own free will to continue or discontinue...all you have control over is you and we all pass and fail certain obstacles that lay in our path of life...but the key is learning from them...yes we each do actions that bring about positive or negative reactions in others, but they too have decisions to make for themselves just like you...EXCELLENT SCR...
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  BeeTrue
10/05/09 (01:42 AM) 
Wow! Sad...

  daidai_dts4l
08/26/09 (08:50 PM) 
DAAAAAAAAAAMNNN. wow that was crazy. i like how you accept the blame. that shows maturity. good write and please dont stop

  Remy82
08/26/09 (04:48 PM) 
WOOOOOW This is going in my fav's. Very skillful Ms. Lady. I loved this and I can relate so much on this. You expressed this effortlessly it seems. 10 starz!

  Trill
08/22/09 (02:02 PM) 
man thats krazy and its hard to see u doing it if its real.Well people make mistakes and it was only a mistake made.Keep ur head up and learn from this situation rather it be real or fake.

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