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"Blind Friends"
  by Ash 01


The girl is hurting on the inside but no one will ever know
She goes on day by day her pain will never show.
How much longer do we have when she will get the rope?
She has already past the first stage and now is smoking dope!
How did her parents drive her to this?
And surly she would know how much she will be missed.
Tic Toc, Tic Toc time is ticking time is running out,
But as she has her final look she knows she has no doubts.
This is 1 thing time can not heal and her friends have lost a mate,
all because of this stupid world that’s filled with love and hate!
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Date Submitted: Mar 12, 2007 (10:03 PM)
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  mykah
03/13/07 (09:01 PM) 
youve read me this one before. but i still love it

  DesirePoetry
03/13/07 (12:38 AM) 
nice write...keep up the good work...pen to paper

  Lani
03/12/07 (10:31 PM) 
I LOVE THIS!!!! it really good

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