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"Blinded"
  by MR.INTUITIVE


yes, i truly see me being bored in the future

Blinded by sun shine,blind by rain drops
Blinded by love,blind by hate
Blinded by lights,Blind by mistakes
Blinded by peers,Blind by the fears
blinded by our fate,it gonna be to late
Blinded in eyes,seeing only the highs
Blinded in ears,satan wispers in the right
Blinded in the heart,soul to torn apart

But I didn’t say anything,it’s just to evil
Don’t’s take my word for it’s happening
Everywhere.we are being deceives so that
We aren’t see whats truly there
We are blind by sun believing it sunny outside
and then you know it the rain comes.being
in love is a good thing but if you never experience hate
then you’ll never appreciate that”love”.being blinded
by the lights is like the sun or you can say fame not
being prepared for our mistakes.and being blinded by
our peers because we’re afraid of being alone but its our
peers that gets us in trouple.if you hang with a bunch of
nutscase then you a nut too for example and the rest of
the poem you’ll have to use your own mind to figure out.
It’s not hard it a matter a fact it's common sense.but then
again common sense is seeing things the logical way.we need
to see things with insight.what lies beneath the exterior.
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Date Submitted: Oct 27, 2009 (02:07 AM)
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Date: 10/27/09 (02:45 AM)
Author: MR.INTUITIVE
Poem Title: found

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  floatingonthev...
10/28/09 (12:01 AM) 
I liked this a lot because it's so realistic, people are very "blind"... and I think the more you educate yourself and believe ur own ideas, rather than the news, tv, romance novels, whatever your cup of tea is to give you some direction in life.. oh and common sense unfortunately a lot of people truly lack,, so this poem,.. if you get it.. which I do... is very poignant.. nice write.

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