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"BLINDED"
  by Remy82


What is this love that continue’s to be spoken?
Somethin that’s claimed to be given
But they action’s show that they jokin

Murs said that “If God is Love then
Hatin is Satan”
These be the same ones sayin
This is love that they claiming

Claiming to be showing the one that died for us, respect!
Yet you speakin a selfish language
Not a self sacrificing dialect!

Giving up our wants and needs for what he and his father ask back from us
A simple gesture of obedience is what’s needed from us..
Yes this is something REAL we can trust

Filled with such lawlessness
That’s what this world is filled with
“It’s all about me!”
That’s what our mouths are filled with

Talking bout “I’m Christian”
But do we really understand the meaning of that?!
Do we really know what’s involved with that?!
Could it mean doing the WILL of his Father to the full
But I can’t find no one who gives a crap

Don’t care about HIS will cause we too caught up and distracted
By the things that surround us each day
“Britney’s Had a Break Down”
“Kobe Cheated On His Wife!”
“Chris Brown Smacked Rhianna In The Face”

But see we’re too blinded by what’s really taking place
The number one hater rullin this system, pulling a wool over our face

Got us deeply rooted in our traditions and yearly celebrations
Got us thinking they are oh so holy but in reality
They are pure fabrications

Fabrications on what originally was pure
Fabrications on what we think is pleasing
On those beliefs alone we, would STAND for sure

What truth have we really searched for in this world that we reside in?
Take for face value what we’ve been told from our priest or reverend

Search for ourselve’s that’s how we can truly understand
Truly understand the real WILL, Obey GOD!! Rather than man!!

He told us if we keep on searching then we will be able to find
Find the meaning of life, or place in this world and what REALLY happens when we die

“But I can’t give up what I’ve known, this is dear to my heart!”
Not even giving second thought to what is acceptable to who created us…
Totally just disregard that part!!

“I am highly favored”
As we puff on that joint and defame that beautiful body we were given.
Giving ourselves to another without dedicating ourselves to the person that receives
Yet we expect to be in heaven

Just cause Jesus died for us, doesn’t mean it’s a free for all
It means sometimes we mess up and because of him we able to get back up and stand tall

Stand tall and pray “Dear Lord I’ve failed once again
Please give me the strength to take this world’s spirit on the chin.

Cause this world is beating me up and it’s hard not to give in”
But he says he only allows us to handle
What we are able to withstand

Of course the original hater would love for us to think
That whatever were are asked from the Most High
We are unable to do because we are too weak

However that is untrue because of course he is the “Father of The Lie”
Out of love for us he sent his only be-gotten Son and with that he layed down his life

So that we can take advantage of this ransom sacrifice
To atone for our many MISTAKES
So that we can strive to live the way it is outlined for us in his WORD
And live a clean life

We can’t let ourselves be blinded
And let that hater continue to be
Just a figment of our imagination
A mere conspiracy

No see he is real
Just look around you and see
This world is full of hatred
And people who lack responsibility

People dying everyday
And you ask the question why
Cause this is Satan’s system
No this is not a lie

Peer deep into the Words
That we claim we hold so dear to our heart
Read about how Satan offered Jesus these governments
Have you ever read that part

It makes you ask yourself
How could that ever be
Cause people always says
This is Jesus world you see

But even in his own word’s
He admitted it too
That this system was not his
So tell me which one is true

Makes us wonder huh
Makes us think “what do I truly believe?”
Might be that time for us to actually sit down and read

Read what He’s trying to say to us
Cause yes his Word is simply a letter
A letter to help us see the truth and
Help us to live life for the better

We complain of all the strife we have, yet we dare not question our actions
Can things flow like streams of water if we follow his word by just a fraction?

And we dare not question each other about the course we choose to pursue
I’m sorry but we have already been judged,
It is God who has judged you

His judgement is clear in the words that we read
But we follow what we want to follow and read what we want to read
Cause some things read, on our life it impeads

We can’t pick and choose like a celestial buffet!
We have to open eyes see the truth and be moved to obey!
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Date Submitted: Jul 01, 2009 (04:00 PM)
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  MR. BYRD
07/06/09 (09:19 AM) 
yo...you really got me thinking a lot over here...whoaa....that was insanely deep...and yes people are blindside by reality and the truth....when we are sitting here on fantasy island thinking nothing can happen or rather taking things for granted ya dig....this is a piece I gotta fave....real talk, great work and continue to shine that light and widom in that pen...

  cocoadiva
07/04/09 (02:46 PM) 
WOW WHAT A HEART FELT EMOTIONAL PIECE... I LOVED IT.. KEEP WRITING... 10S AND A FAV

  3rd_Coast
07/03/09 (08:17 PM) 
Lengthy and Great scribe. Stated MANY MANY Facts in this.Love the strong soul expressed is this., this is a powerful piece which is the norm with you everytime i read your pieces you amaze me in more ways. The stanza with Brittany, Kobe and Chris is so true. Preaching the truth out there. Worth way more then the alloted 10 stars and definately going to my favorites

  StraY12
07/02/09 (05:57 PM) 
This is a revealing piece I understand what you mean when it comes to this type of ordeal I usually have thoughts like this but I feel awkward writing about it...I think it takes a strong soul to express this exactly how you did! I like it!

  Lady_Style
07/02/09 (05:38 PM) 
Wow..this is a powerful piece thats beautifully written. Great work! xx

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