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"Brainstorm"
  by Bedo




Tryin to stay humble
But my vision is blurry
I see double
Double the hate
Double the trouble
No matter what I do
I always seem to stumble
Upon bloodsuckers
But my motivation won't crumble
2 faced hoes
Ask for my numba
Smile all in my face
But under their breathe they mumble
Fuck em
I'm tryna get money in bundles
I'm a thursty young brotha
Lookin for a puddle
But when I get close, I tumble
I continue the struggle
Bcuz I wanna run til
I score big time
I hope I don't fumble
I'm down to rumble
Wit anyone who oppose me, I'll pummel
They all can get it
In this concrete jungle,


~Bedo~
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Date Submitted: Jan 11, 2007 (02:39 PM)
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  XPERIENCE
04/21/07 (03:16 AM) 
damn u must be in my head..i feel this one too... damn i often feel like this... sometimes it feels like ppl out to get u.. but u gotta always be one step ahead.. love the flow on this one

  TAY345
04/05/07 (03:57 PM) 
dang u a nastural born poet i love how every sentence didnt rhyme this is d a defintion of a tru poet lol i love it seriouly dang da way this is goin im bout to fav al ya stuf

  Ms. B
02/28/07 (06:05 PM) 
I undastand everything you side. Dude you got madd skillz!! Keep doing what you do

  LilRippsta
02/26/07 (08:04 PM) 
Damn I really feel u dis cuz I can relate *****10***** of dem boyz

  QueenV
02/22/07 (02:25 PM) 
I feel that,

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