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"breaking waves"
  by Night Crawler
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Recital of the Waves by Wordsmith



strong base ..yet so weak

shallow water .. i now break

no longer a wave


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you can walk up straight , on the inside we all the same ... vulnerable
a wave can break just in a few seconds .. just like your heart
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Date Submitted: Sep 15, 2009 (10:57 AM)
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  Wordsmith
09/15/09 (03:00 PM) 
Your creativity is endless, keep the pen flowing...

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