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"Breathe"
  by Ciara


Take a deep breath
He's coming my way...


He speaks to me with a deep bartetone voice
and I cant speak
Im speechless
...and even still I cant breathe...

He smiles a beautiful smile
and I can feel myself turning red, then purple, then blue.
I can feel myself starting to float
im getting light headed
But I cant faint....
Im stuck, glued to the ground
my heart beat pounds...
...thru my chest
I take another deep breath...


...Im Nervous...
He takes my breath away
and Im constantly, anxiously...waiting to exhale.

He speaks with authority, control, and confidence
leaving me... breathless
I cant help but hold my breath in his presence
because I breathe for him
my heart beats for him
and my soul speaks to him
... in 5 different languages I cant even understand

I pray to God...asking...
what is it that he's doing to me?
I never met a knight so strong to sweep me off my feet.
And when he holds me close
my heart skips a beat.
He whispers in my ear as if he knows
what Im thinking...
And he tells me to...Breathe...

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Date Submitted: Dec 28, 2008 (04:46 PM)
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  Tran'Quility
05/19/09 (12:55 AM) 
MY HEART BEATS FOR HIM AND MY SOUL SPEAKS TO HIM, WOW, THIS HAD ME TELLING MYSELF TO BREATH, I REMEMBER FEELING THAT WAY. BEAUTIFUL.

  J.Hard
04/02/09 (02:04 PM) 
nicely put...i like how u described your feelings...good job ma...

  big josh
02/10/09 (12:02 AM) 
yo dis was nice shorty

  NubianaStormz
02/09/09 (09:47 PM) 
BEAUTIMUS write....left me excited to feel this once more in my own world... stay true! ten ten ; ]

  Momma Bear
12/29/08 (10:16 PM) 
simply put into words...beautiful and simplistically elegant. bravo.

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