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"Brick Wall"
  by SmAsH/BaByFaCe


Standin’ here starrin’ @ dis brick wall
Wonderin’ y my questions go unanswered
I jus wanna know how I can help baby
But I get no response from dis brick wall
A wall dat stands @ 5’7”
……caramel-honey skin tone
I love dis brick wall wit a deep passion
But theres times when this brick wall keeps me from wats on the otha side…..
So I stare @ da brick wall askin’ myself shit wat can I do?
Wat can I say?
I know im not da reason but damn I wanna know
Know wat got u starrin’ back stonecold
So im standin’ here in front of u
Standin’ wit open arms
Because u know…nah we know dat im always here
Here 2 comfort u
Console u
Hold u
Squeeze u
Kiss u
Love u
Shit girl im jus here 4 U!
But y u still give me da brick wall treatment
Standin’ there cryin’
Starrin’, quiet, n stone like cement
I jus wanna help so wat can I do?
I don’t like dis feelin’ of helplessness
Nope not 1 bit shorty
But I aint movin’
Im still standin’ in front of dis brick wall
Not budgin’ a muscle
Because I know dat dis so-called brick wall
WILL eventually...........
....Crumble
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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (04:08 PM)
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  Sweettweety23
12/08/08 (11:34 PM) 
Wow its krazy as a female, hearing the other side of this....all I can say is although it's counter productive, sumtimes shutting down is all we can do to prevent you from having to pay for another's mistakes.....it takes patience and persistence to love a woman but if you are the right dude that wall will eventually come down! 10starz

  Destined
12/07/08 (06:11 PM) 
wow. talent in a poetic form. i don't know why as women we shut people out.. but it is something that happens. but unlike others you stay and that is what matters in the end the patience... that many others dont have. keep wrting definitly. i love the structure you put forth and the emotion.. i am gonna need to know that this runs in ur family. do u have a brother. lol 10 stars

  Bratt
12/06/08 (09:19 PM) 
aww you got mad skill , yo gurl is lucky to have you! Im glad you use yo writing to express yo feelings, like you took your heart out of your chest shaped it like a pen an wrote this piece wit it. 10 stars

  THE TRUE LADY ...
12/05/08 (01:37 AM) 
BABY U ALMOST MADE ME CRY. IM SORRY FOR HURTIN U. THIS OPENS UP MY EYES ALTHOUGH I WONT CHANGE OVER NIGHT. I LOVE YOU. MMM. KEEP DAT PEN MOVIN

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