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"Brick Walls"
  by Angel
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Am Not Him (Video) by nywizdom


He stood in awe
of the
structural settlement
she’d deemed
suitable for
herself

The impenetrably
thick walls

The height and length
in comparison
to him
almost diminished
him as a man

Twice he
found himself
seriously contemplating
doing an about face
and leaving her
trapped inside that
empty space

That solitary confinement she’d
decided to create

But he could
see
beyond the barriers

beyond that which had served
to separate them
over the years

Those walls
that
distorted the words
between the moment
his two lips
parted

and the actual introduction
of its sound into
her ears

And she’d swear
on a stack of
Bibles
that he wasn’t
sincere

He didn’t really love her

Couldn’t possibly
care –

not for real

So there she stayed
puzzling over
his true intentions
for the rest of her years

But he
Was long gone
by then…

Fed up
with the rejection
of standing outside brick walls
trying to one day
get in

He simply
walked away

leaving her
alone
with all
her baggage…



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Date Submitted: Apr 20, 2008 (12:29 AM)
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  nywizdom
04/24/08 (08:00 PM) 
oh shiznit mama! i'm mad late, but still...that's wassup mama. luvin it! truth spit!!

  mindigoblue
04/22/08 (11:11 PM) 
See now I'm going to have to think about this long and hard because I am open and honest (brutally sometimes) about my cynicism...wearing my jade costume like a badge of honor. You have given me a perspective that calls for my attention. I even wrote about the wall you described here, sometime back. If you don't mind I'm just going to take this one to go so I can let it marinate a little bit. Thank you for this...

  **HOLLA**
04/20/08 (10:17 PM) 
Oh wow, I agree with Cat, this just smacks you in the face if you're the type to build security walls in an effort to protect yourself from what you think is others, but in reality it could also be yourself, it can be taken many different ways you know, but how sad that he left her to deal on her own, nice twist to this and a great response...

  .Always.Catali...
04/20/08 (01:48 PM) 
...this was a wake up call for me today if ever I was given one...I must admit I am one of those that builds walls....and almost never tear any down...having been on both sides of feelings like this this piece is an automatic fav Angel...beautiful and profound

  heaviness
04/20/08 (08:55 AM) 
Twice he found himself seriously contemplating doing an about face and leaving her trapped inside that empty space That solitary confinement she’d decided to create the truth of my life on this sunday morning -- i could just whip your ass for the cold water thrown -- but i have to extend my arms and embrace the unwelcomed truth -- thanks -- with your deep ass pen - i love hating you right now

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