See now I'm going to have to think about this long and hard because I am open and honest (brutally sometimes) about my cynicism...wearing my jade costume like a badge of honor. You have given me a perspective that calls for my attention. I even wrote about the wall you described here, sometime back. If you don't mind I'm just going to take this one to go so I can let it marinate a little bit. Thank you for this...
Oh wow, I agree with Cat, this just smacks you in the face if you're the type to build security walls in an effort to protect yourself from what you think is others, but in reality it could also be yourself, it can be taken many different ways you know, but how sad that he left her to deal on her own, nice twist to this and a great response...
...this was a wake up call for me today if ever I was given one...I must admit I am one of those that builds walls....and almost never tear any down...having been on both sides of feelings like this this piece is an automatic fav Angel...beautiful and profound
Twice he
found himself
seriously contemplating
doing an about face
and leaving her
trapped inside that
empty space
That solitary confinement she’d
decided to create
the truth of my life on this sunday morning -- i could just whip your ass for the cold water thrown -- but i have to extend my arms and embrace the unwelcomed truth -- thanks -- with your deep ass pen - i love hating you right now