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"Broken"
  by LakotaPoet12


the uncontrollable pain sets in
starts to weaken my mind
im starting to feel the numbness of my body
emptiness of my soul, the gaping hole in my heart
something is missing everything seems to be dimming
no light, no sign of hope
locked away memories
never to be seen
slowly killing me, ripping my life apart
shredding it into tiny pieces
what left of my heart is gently weeping
the pain is so deep
i start to whimper as i just lay there
motionless, heartbroken
the urge to scream just builds
leaving me exhausted
gasping for air....
the absents of your presence
is slowly shutting me down
i feel like im falling
with nothing to catch me...
the agony is so terrifying im so alone...
SO BROKEN.....
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Date Submitted: Jul 15, 2009 (04:11 PM)
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  Kunspikuous
07/16/09 (12:03 AM) 
you surely know how to express emotions girl. good piece.

  Rythmslove
07/15/09 (10:53 PM) 
you did great job with expressing your emotions i could feel your pain.

  The Poetic Gen...
07/15/09 (05:01 PM) 
This Is Very Nice. I Love The Emotion You Put Into This. Nice Write. Keep Doing What You Do.

  J- ANIMAL
07/15/09 (04:42 PM) 
yea ma this right goes deep im feelin the flow and i can feel the emotion

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