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"broken home"
  by princessnikki


if i told you bout the shit im goin through
just like me, you probably wont see what ive been put on this earth to do
before i couldnt wait to go home
now i try and bury the thought like a dog and his bone
im livin in a broken home, its crumbling, we all stumbling
my family is fallin apart before my eyes
its like my whole life has been based on lies
thinkin bout how happy i use to be
i should try and find that same key
everyday my mum use to say that she would leave
but no-one believed
one day we woke up and she had gone
tellin me my father had done her wrong
growing up s a child i only saw that he treated her with respect
and now she tries to tell he deserves what he gets
i dont understand what he could have done
but still she chose to run
never givin an explanation
except that its a fucked up situation
got up and left me and my brother
that dont seem like no true mother
thought my life woulda got worse,
at 1st it felt like i was livin a curse
learnt to deal with watever comes my way
deep down i know that one day she will pay
for all those times she made me cry
but for now im jus livin 2 get by...
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Date Submitted: Aug 18, 2007 (12:50 PM)
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  Penny Lane
10/08/07 (02:57 PM) 
Wow, girl. This is an amazing write!!! It's so damn sad how so many of us can relate to you on this. Keep on writing. It'll help you get through anything life throws your way.

  lonewolf
09/26/07 (08:05 AM) 
i don't kno wut to say we in the same situation but with different causes

  ClandestineLov...
08/28/07 (01:22 PM) 
this was one of them poems that just make you say damn..but its in a good way cause the poem was good and you can tell it was written with emotion very good poem

  Forchunit169
08/19/07 (05:48 PM) 
this was excellent well expressed and alot of us has had to deal with this situation a time or two ten starz you wrote a brilliant piece

  Will charles
08/19/07 (04:20 PM) 
This is really deep and personal. Very sad, hard to read and not feel. you really know how to express your emotions. 10 starz, but this deserves so much more

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