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"broken promises..."
  by Fina


Hopelessly bound unfettered by the chains
of love’s grip on my soul.
Sometimes, tears say all that can be said,
and understanding comes only with time
realizing that our love was nothing
more than a wasteland of broken promises and
a field of empty dreams.
I sit and watch what once made me
feel so emotionally whole and physically secure
rotting away like a
disgusting science project for all to see.
My tears…blown across my face by the
winds of sorrow and sadness.
Trying to understand these crazy circumstance
that dictates my feelings.
I guess sometimes the very things that drew us to a person
can remind us why it didn't
work and will never work.
This love..like the inner workings of my mind has never been simple.
I know that Love doesn't always end in “happily ever after”,
even if ONE still loves.
See, I love you completely, but the love was not returned
so I must bestow a most painful gift….of… letting go.
Love….this Universal emotion, the goal
we all seek,
the prize that can make our lives complete and whole.
Love is both timeless and, in too
many instances, transient.
The longer a relationship is alive, the longer it takes to
get over its death.
But, for all things, there is a time.
You left without a backward glance…now, THIS woman is
moving on..building my courage and becoming stronger and wiser.
I am blinded by the rays of the sun shinning in my future.
I smile bright knowing that for every loss..
there is always something to be gained.

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Date Submitted: Mar 18, 2009 (10:20 AM)
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  iamthesmc
02/10/10 (02:02 PM) 
beautiful <3 ,

  ♥ ร...
04/22/09 (11:16 AM) 
yes an amazing response...you can feel the pain and heartbreak but the hope and compassion that things will get better, and the pain will leave eventually...it just takes time...you did an excellent job on this! 10's

  Mz Marie
04/03/09 (10:00 PM) 
I have a write called broken promises as well.. seems like they could coincide with each other. Nicely done lady. I can dig this here..

  Yas
03/29/09 (09:55 PM) 
this is absolutely beautiful... I felt the emotions so strongly...love the positive vibe despite being broken hearted

  RedLoveSong
03/22/09 (05:54 PM) 
Wow, what a response...you really did your thing on this piece....I can't even pick my fav part because it was so full of emotion all the way through, I'm just so sorry I took so long to respond. Thanks for writing this great piece.

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