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"Broken Wings"
  by PoeticSoulja


04 Welcome - Overfloe

The benevolent angels cease to sing
Silenced by the plight of a majestic queen
Love lured her into a seemingly inevitable fate
Forced to bare the heaviness of sadness's weight

Dreariness hovers around her genuine heart
Leaving me wanting to prevent her from falling apart
Desperately attempting to banish that burdensome lament
My compassion will chisels away depression's relent

I long to return tranquil to the realm known as her mind
By demolishing the shackles that tightly bind
Her fragile emotions are shielded my regard
The goddess is far more precious than a diamond shard

These broken wings I shall happily mend
Never again will this beautiful dove descend
While in my care, tears will not fall from her eyes
Giving her license to roam freely throughout the skies

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Date Submitted: Dec 08, 2008 (07:38 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 12/18/08 (04:54 PM)
Author: bumpy
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comment icon  COMMENTS (16)
  Mz.PoeticOffic...
04/28/09 (08:46 PM) 
Such a beautiful poem. I'm speechless.

  tngrl
03/05/09 (03:09 PM) 
DAMN PS!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU??? I mean you were ALWAYS one of the Best but dang... you just hit a GRAND SLAM OVER THE FENCE!!! the music, the picture, the words, the message... you got me all teary eyed over here... felling like im at a wedding, church, and baptism all in one!

  Jai Love
03/02/09 (09:48 PM) 
This is really good. It envokes thought.. which I like. Too many people write bland material. Nice job. 10 Stars.

  Mojo JoJo
02/27/09 (12:28 AM) 
WOW MAN!!!!! I have been on your page in a while but like always you never seem to let me down your vocabulary is always on point as well as your rhymes oh yeah I got one called broken wings as well not near as good as this but you know how I write keep up the astonishing work man!!!!!!!!!

  Iaintgot1
02/17/09 (06:50 AM) 
oh wow....so poetic...almost musical...it heard a melody I swear...is that harps I hear?? This is beautiful...everything just goes together sooo well... 10 stars

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