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"Brother In The Chamber"
  by marcuz aka moo


Brother in the chamber
Family in the dungeon

Behold the great underachiever
The mighty non-believer
“Off with his head!” shrieks the queen
with cigarette smoke pouring from her lips, and nostrils.
Brother never really listened to mother
Now he’s in shackles and enslaved to the path that he has chosen

Brother is in chains
Brother is in shackles
Brother in the chamber
Family in the dungeon

He’s guilty! Just-us is served cries the Queen as she bangs her gavel.
Brother broke promises, hearts, and the rules.
Brother got mother to withdraw him out of school
So he can do the dance of the fools.
Can you hear the sound of his shackles clanking together??
Can’t you hear the Queen’s awful cackles echoing in the distance??
“I sentence you to death!” , squeals the Queen.

Brother is on his knees
Brother’s head was placed in the guillotine
Brother is in chains
Bother is in shackles
Brother in the chamber
Family in the dungeon
Brother is now…
Free

Written by Moo
“Bother in the chamber”
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Date Submitted: Mar 29, 2009 (03:55 AM)
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  Ms. Smith
10/29/09 (07:26 PM) 
Damn...I am so happy I found you tonight. I am gonna make frequent stops to your page. Your poetry is different than what I am used to reading.

  TheUltimateCur...
07/05/09 (06:09 AM) 
Steep! lovin this!

  averageman
06/05/09 (02:18 PM) 
WORD PLAY IS SICK I LIKE YOUR STYLE "JUST US IS SERVED" ALSO LOVE BROTHER IS NOW FREE SHOWS RELIEF GOOD PIECE

  DOMINICANPOET
03/31/09 (08:06 AM) 
very powerful...never thought to check out ur scribess....buhh here i am,..man your an excellent writer ten...

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
03/30/09 (09:27 PM) 
Powerful piece written with such indepth conviction. Very much enjoyed. Keep striving........

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