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"Bullet To The Brain"
  by XPERIENCE


Guns Are Drawn - The Roots

trigger happy saps
weeping over weapons
shiny black steel with no ammunition
hollow barrels lodge lifeless bullets
oozing uzi’s
9mm. whispering taunts
into ear canals unwilling to believe
shots never ring
yet gun powder residue
resides on rims of open mouths
“what the fuck you gotta say now?”
NOTHING!
silent screams roar fearful of
sounds that mimic reality
“What’s the FUCKING PROCEDURE when you got a GUN AT YOUR HEAD???”
unsure if the next breath will be your last
thinking back to the boldness you once possessed
the confidence that once bellowed within you
now bare…
like a shotgun to a shattering soul…
do you scream out in revolt…
or will silence be your last sound?
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Date Submitted: May 27, 2009 (04:52 PM)
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  Snugasaglove (...
07/08/09 (08:07 PM) 
Wow! But this was more reality than metaphysical for me! ---Great flow and descriptive language!

  big josh
06/13/09 (09:10 PM) 
dman this shit was sick

  Boston617
06/13/09 (03:04 PM) 
this is very strong and powerful. i love it and 10 stars for you. god bless you...

  B Dub S
06/12/09 (05:13 PM) 
This is my first introductory piece to your ink. Listening, reading the way you think. And this one is off the charts with symbolism (10). Emotion (10). Great job on getting inside your readers head.

  vagrom
06/10/09 (04:05 PM) 
this was the first time i read your work and i'm glad i did...this piece SCREAMED off the page, your flow hard and lovely...ill ink, Divine...

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