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"Burning Desire"
  by A.C.H.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Hungry by Raxxie


Starved by the thing that has been deprived
Starved by the thing that has been denied
Starved by the absence of being close to you
Finding out what starvation and craving do

Craving to consume you entirely
Craving coming from a ravenous mentality
Craving increasing beginning to amplify
Swelling and swelling is now too hard to hide.

Wandering eyes with wandering thoughts
Wandering, wondering if this is all for naught
Wandering thoughts lead to wondering minds
Wondering if wandering becomes something sublime

Curious mind leads to curious needs,
Curiously avoiding and not pleased.
Curiously obsessed by your curious tease
To fulfill curiosity puts my body and mind at ease.

Savoring in the moment of ecstasy
Savoring it while you explore the rest of me
Savoring the moment my body is satisfied this
Moving like waves of the ocean between your hips

Satisfaction that leads to much delight
Satisfaction of waiting until it’s right
Satisfaction that is only with my wife
Satisfaction completed on our wedding night
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Date Submitted: May 21, 2009 (10:55 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/29/09 (01:05 PM)
Author: diamondprincess_07
Poem Title: Weather Patterns

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comment icon  COMMENTS (179)
  Kunspikuous
07/23/09 (08:38 PM) 
i loved it. i liked the word flow. the sensual vision you gave was erotic yet curious. 10pts.

  Lewinski
07/12/09 (07:13 PM) 
that shit fiyah! i like the structure and floww. nice write!

  stranger
07/11/09 (03:28 AM) 
And they shall be one flesh ... lovely regimented structure and flow contrasting the soft words , and a veritable rainbow of facets or relationship hanging like grapes on the cultivated vine hanging in bunches for the reader to pick and eat in orderly progression ... nice concept and a nice write :)

  SEXY CARAMEL
07/10/09 (04:59 PM) 
DAMN THATS DEEP I LIKE DAT

  ~*lyriks*~
07/09/09 (09:16 AM) 
yea i lik dis.... really deep 10 4rm me

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