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"Burning Desire"
  by Mr. DID


There is a star out tonight
That is burning for the lover that are snuggled tight

The feeling of their love fills the air
While the wind blows gently with tender care

There aroma of kisses fills their heart all the way to the top
Hoping that the feeling stays mutual and the feelings never stop

The desire that burn to intense to handle
Their desire for each starts to come from out of the shadow

Giving into temptation that feels oh so sweet
The craving that they feel for each other is very hard to beat

Loosing control of their mind without a word being daid
Right then and there a beautiful scenewas then made

Never having the feeling that they felt for one person before
As their passion for each other grows and glows

Their burning desire then begins to fade as they look in each others eyes
As they share a passinate kiss and say their good-byes

Until the next time that they so desperately crave
To fulfill their burning desire that burns with an immortal flame
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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2007 (10:01 PM)
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  Yung Proffo
09/14/09 (08:20 PM) 
this is deep, the poem really was smooth and strong. keep up the good work.

  angelistic
09/14/09 (08:09 PM) 
love it. gave me a warm fuzzy feelin. a love like that is hard to find like u said they never felt that way before for someone else. if its true congrats n i hope ur happy

  MurkBoi
01/22/09 (01:52 PM) 
very lyrical nice flow work of art tight work keep that pad wet bruh

  SiSithaflii3st
04/07/08 (09:36 PM) 
realll cute i like it alot :)

  PRINCESS BEBE
03/31/08 (11:23 PM) 
Awww... i really love ya lyrical flow.This poem is so sweet. It captures the essence of love that so many try to obtain in their relationships. Keep up the great work lil daddy. I give this ten starzzzz.

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