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"Burning Wings"
  by Showcase


He never died
but he also wrote death on his tombstone
here today and gone tomorrow
the mist in the shower told stories
how the vision in my head twist and turn
brutal to my sanity I race to amputate this broken wing
the fire covering the ceiling taunt me
dancing like damaged souls
he just never died, but I could touch him
he burned the part of me that was pure
now my body lack emotions
a song-less hymn of burning wings
he never died
......
becuase he breath in me

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Date Submitted: Oct 20, 2009 (08:52 PM)
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Date: 11/03/09 (05:24 AM)
Author: Showcase
Poem Title: Burning Wings: The E...

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  Successful
10/30/09 (01:47 AM) 
this was was very creative and well thought of my new fan im mos def subscribeing and favor you mama

  Psychosis Aka ...
10/28/09 (12:33 PM) 
"He never died but he also wrote death on his tombstone" thats how you set off a scribe! very well written ! you have embraced a new fan right chea part 2 maybe ?

  Honest Abe
10/25/09 (03:29 AM) 
Whoa....the first two lines just hooked me and I let the imagery just drown my 3rd eye through the rest of this piece.

  lazyme35
10/23/09 (01:29 AM) 
that was a great poem I loved the dedication in this write

  ManOfGod14
10/22/09 (06:49 AM) 
The write, the imagery and the creativity provides poetic excellence. You led this reader down a path of analysis and pushed me to find that message.

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