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"Busted Homes & Gardens"
  by Jamillah


Cra ck.

Cr a c ks.

In this structure (…again).

Chippin’,

peelin’,

rerevealin’,

the Real

u[glie]s.


C r a c k s

cr ac kin’

our foundation;

form a formation
formed from frustrations.

{!{!{same ol’ shit}!}!}

...‘S frustrating. {...Isn't it?}.


Break(ing)-up’s

a surface

hard

to touch

when

what
our
foundation for
making up

is

to

only {and sometimes, give a} fuck.



..'s not a good look.

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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2009 (02:39 PM)
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  Angel
11/12/09 (04:34 PM) 
You know you wrong for that title.. lol I'm feeling this concept... to say the least.

  after vision
10/19/09 (10:08 PM) 
my millah -- sending you a hug from deep in the south -- i love the words but hate that you are not well

  touchdapearl2
10/19/09 (04:12 AM) 
Man...I know well the place inwhich this write comes from....this was a very heavy write so relatable!

  ~Unpredictable...
10/19/09 (12:35 AM) 
I see you kinda sorta still in that \"don\'t give a care mood\"... this was nice.. I wanna stae my fav part, but I want it to show just like is does in the piece so i wont cut, copy and paste it here...then it will be all jumbled up and it will loose that affect.... ugh!..GS *smh*... great scribe poet!

  Laydii Lyric
10/18/09 (10:35 AM) 
this is how i feel right about now... this was deep.

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