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"but i still love you...(SC Monday Challenge)"
  by Autumn joi


i barely even notice how quickly
my days seem to pass by
it’s almost as if the sun rises just as it sets
and i’m lost somewhere in-between
night and day

and the stars don’t even bother to make an appearance
leaving as many holes in the sky as you have left
in my heart
and i stopped counting them both long ago
when i realized i had gone past
infinity

the silencing of a beating heart speaks loudly…

but still falls on deaf ears
balanced on the sides of blind eyes that refuse to see the truth
you left
because i was never good enough to deserve
to be loved
by you




Inspired by the quote...
"The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you." ~Anonymous
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Date Submitted: Jul 08, 2009 (11:17 PM)
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  Cornfed
07/26/09 (09:00 AM) 
You never miss a chance to dive deep and touch the soul!

  ghostwryta
07/17/09 (02:49 PM) 
this poem speaks truths on so many levels in my life...damn woman. your words sure do talk to me lady

  tayetaye
07/12/09 (10:58 PM) 
This poem is so deep i can really relate to this poem keep up the good work

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07/10/09 (08:31 PM) 
"The Silence Of a Beating heart Speaks loudly" That line just crushed me...but this whole piece was spun 2gether so amazingly...beautiful imagery and powerful Emotion's and Endearment...u had more then a couple of lines I'd Fav. just off the depth of such...but ths piece is a fav. of mine 4 it's truth and feeling...bravo goddess I am really loving this write here! Keep that pen inking It's Enchanting Prose J.

  Ulises
07/09/09 (11:20 PM) 
I don't think Ive read a poem at this caliber in awhile,the writing is definitely at whole other level,this poem read beautifully

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