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"but.her.flies"
  by 11th Wonduh




japanese cherry
blossom fields

panoramic
sighting...

(i)

soulful butterfly
freestyle flutterin'

(c)

..wavin your wings...

(a)

magnifyin under the
rays of the cherry moon

(n)

symmetrically formulating
heartshaped visions

(t)

...w/ cherry sunrays...

(let)

hummin, intimate
sonatas, scribin

(you)

...love triolets...

(get)

affectionately
passionately

(a)

blowin cherry
butterfly kisses

(w)

wavin my heart's
emotional net

(a)

in attempts
to capture you

(y)

add you to
my intimate collection

captured you
momentarily

majestically, you
fluttered away

leavin me w/ an
intimate message

"love, we'll be
together soon"

..madame
butterfly..








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Date Submitted: Jan 07, 2009 (01:49 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 01/10/09 (01:03 AM)
Author: Group: the soul
Poem Title: but.her.flies

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comment icon  COMMENTS (27)
  Monae'
11/13/09 (01:16 PM) 
Uniquely written....never seen this style before. I admire it and it is inspiring.

  floatingonthev...
11/06/09 (11:51 AM) 
this poem, is really just nothing but beautiful, I really enjoyed this write, it's going on my favs, It's not often I read something about love.... in a form so innocent and romantic... the picture is really nice in the background too but I enjoyed the poem so much more... Very nice write!

  Sunkissed25
11/02/09 (11:43 PM) 
This picture is gorgeous behind your words that were also very elegant...light like butterfly wings. Great piece!

  angelistic
10/04/09 (04:27 PM) 
ahh thats sweet. i hope she doesn't get away. very beautiful

  Queenscribe
09/21/09 (02:58 AM) 
Sooooo beautiful. it took me a minute to read the vertical msg. but i like that. it was clever.

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