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""Calamity""
  by NubianaStormz


....it will be interesting to see who's still around years from now
Who will be there to call friend or foe;
Acquaintances; and the maintenance that will need to be done from past relations..
Pointless
The loves lost; the apathetic feeling one has against the world when everything is ultimately done....
The stories they shall tell of the untold
Fore what was really held in secrecy
Should we not dwell on what we never knew?
Or should we make a calamity of what could have been...an untouchable undying emotion that deeply supresses the yearning of the heart and the burning touch of the skin from the one you call lover and friend...
Those closest to you far by miles now...why?...inquiring of answers I will have to fend for myself....
I wonder if those who love me now will hate me later.
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Date Submitted: Apr 20, 2008 (03:26 PM)
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  shyeboogie
05/12/08 (05:31 AM) 
can't do nothing but agree iwth the others i had to read it twice my self just because of the thoughts that ran through me but none the less great write deep and truth loved it

  Davy
04/25/08 (05:43 AM) 
"Acquaintances; and the maintenance that will need to be done from past relations.. Pointless ".....uh yeh.Who says that? Straight Fire mama...and U gonna stop with all the subliminals :P A "Dime Piece" none the less

  Dante'
04/22/08 (09:44 AM) 
It's Peculiar...It's incitive. It's vivid. It's a deep thought to process. It's one of the few good ones I've seen on here. Sincerely, I like this.

  kiss my ass! &...
04/22/08 (09:33 AM) 
that was good and made an important point who will be here yaers from now?

  AR-15
04/22/08 (09:19 AM) 
Very deep and emotional. You pulled me in from start to finish. I love what you had to say here. Great write, keep it up

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