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"call dis one wat chu want"
  by man:man


Put my emotions aside, check my feelings at the door, put my fist to her chin, now blood stains on the floor. Cause she was so heartless, that made me so thoughtless. Who knew a one night stand could of brought this? the coldest story i ever told and the coldest one you'll ever read, i can feel my heart beat comin back, the more i make heart bleed. remember when we started datin an i told ju if you ever cheat on me i a kill you, i guess those were words i spoke that you didn't feel was true. she Grabbed my heart out wit pitch fork den had the nerves to catch an attitude, im 6' 2'' 201, you chould a thought before you lit that fuse. I got ever reason to just keep swingin, and it better now be boyfriend #2 that got yo phone over there ringin. I cried tears on every wall an broke ever picture out of its frame, "NEVER BREAK A MAN'S HEART, THATS A LIFE AN DEATH GAME!!
Royshawn L Walker
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Date Submitted: Mar 07, 2009 (09:47 AM)
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  DreamGurl
03/08/09 (12:31 AM) 
damn wow i feel you in this piece nicely expressed keep it up

  Shannelle
03/07/09 (11:33 PM) 
Damnmm, raw emotion right there. It's lovely in a way. Ye, I said lovely. Heartbreaking, though, sorry to hear about it... But a great write. And the format fits well.

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