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"Calling On Love To You"
A Hoodz Advokate and Nee-Nee459 Collaboration


  Nee-Nee459:

I couldn't crave the way he look, but he talk with a rich creamed voice
He was mine and I was his, would we break up for the better?
He gave an answer, but I loved him
From the top of his head to the bottom of his feet,
From my bed he sleeps in to ever piece of food he eats
He knew I made it possible to not leave him alone.
He is always there by my side to know that he won't let me go...

  Hoodz Advokate:

She was my everything but i wasnt on the right radar
i thought she was doin me wrong
but she ws plannin for write
i fell so incompitent and foolish
i miss...the way...she does everything
chews,sleeps,....
man i fucked up....i need help....

  Nee-Nee459:

He says he fucked up. but was it all worth it?
Could I find someone else like him? Shit Happy finding it
I can't, won't, I shoudn't
He made everlasting love to me
And how I miss him calling my name in the heatness of the dark
Was it possible for him to call...

  Hoodz Advokate:

.....her my sunshine?
yeah it was no, is, no was, no is.....
worth it
thats my baby, one an only
my ace boon koon
im goin back fore her this moment this instant
baby gurl from the newer world...im comming

  Nee-Nee459:

He called he 's here come ova he
Kiss me, love me touch me.
'Yes we are back' are his words to me
Kiss, kiss, kiss juicy and tender
to his call of love, I surrender.
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Date Submitted: Nov 14, 2007 (12:44 PM)
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  azzurablue
11/14/07 (05:36 PM) 
i enjoyed this write and sometimes it is really hard to let go of love that strong.Nice writing guys

  Modia
11/14/07 (01:32 PM) 
Aww...that was sweet...at first I was like huh??? but then I was like whoa!!! great ending to a beautiful love poem

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